Thursday, October 31, 2013

Blog Post 010 | October 31, 2013 | "In the Station at the Metro" Imitiation

"At Dusk, Noticing the Cobweb"

Tangled and quivered in the corner, I see that
It is a pure reflection

"Looking Deeply into the Machine"

Take measure in shifts of these cogs, wheels, and pistons
Like burning oil in my brain

"The Length of She"

We are magnets in a field. You are distant gold.
Fifteen infinite inches.

Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Blog Post 009 | October 29, 2013 | "Sonnet"

A song sang of sonnets mixed
The ticking clock pulls past
All the things, taught new- to last
Though words oft fell betwixt

And bound, or culled
Or brought by flame
But some to hear refrains
Sits the chorus- partway lulled
Though me, not with disdain

Oh, cruel time!
The noonday hour
The cost the hear these rhymes
Old knowledge- that makes power

And to craft? Far worse!
A taxing game
One's head feels though to burst
So, I end- smiled, and sane.
(But wish for a longer verse)

Notes: This assignment was significantly harder than I thought it would be. The rules imposed by sonnets (which I broke- twice- just to make it sound better) definitely make the rhyme scheme challenging.

I hope my bending of the rules can be forgiven. It almost creates an interesting effect- the brand new student, clumsily aping along his best facsimile of the masters' style.

I had fun with this. I am used to poetry that is completely free flowing and without rules (and often without rhymes). It added a new challenge to try to make it fit into a certain style or “shape” of rhyming.


Sunday, October 20, 2013

Blog Post 008 | October 20, 2013 | "Ode to Silence"

 There are few places left
On this green Earth
Where it is truly possible to
Escape

There is always a hum, a whisper
Often banter
Music
Or simply noise
Something pressing against our ears
Whether we want it or not

The common explanation is
That we have to live like this
Our machines and conveniences
Force us to pay their loud toll

But, I think the truth
Is something much deeper
If we flipped the switch
And shut it all down
We might finally be forced
To know what it is
That we
Most secretly
Most intimately
Believe